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The position of girls in the Moghul rule became worse , they could not
overcome the nasty Purdah system of the time. Further, there was the custom of
Sati. many women were forcibly sent to the funeral pyre of their dead husbands. There was no change in the fate
of women even now …I have written few lines dedicated to “Women” lets
raise voice and stand together to eradicate discrimination and crime against
women …
Girl
alone , moving on the road
She was scared , looking here and there
Who have made her feel so
Our society gifted her such insecurity
forced to satisfy the se*ual thirsty
and thrown on the road
she is secure only in books and in lectures
she has given equal rights and freedom
only in literature and speeches
she is not a commodity ,in the horrible dowry market
A women has to understand her potential
And should raise voice against any violence
She should not wait for the help
And should start it herself
She should understand that
She is a Women of courage
Women of strength , Women of faith
Women of devotion and
Women of spirits so strong !!
Be the voice
of change and tell us what you would want to change around you! It’s really a
Time to Change!
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she has the freedom and equal rights only in literature and speeches.
ReplyDeletebeautifully written. all the best for the contest.
Thanks :) same to u!
DeleteVery well written poem..
ReplyDeleteThanks :) Keep visitng!!
Deletefirst time on your blog... very well put... its a cry, no one to land ear... our society will never change... we have to change ourselves...
ReplyDeletenice one
well said ..nd thanks:)
Deleteexcellent penning, plight of women is rightly since ages. superb way of pen.
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteGood one! Hope this wakes up the souls who have been sleeping so far.
ReplyDeletethanks !!
Delete@ all ....keep visiting nd inspiring :)
Nice thoughts well written to make some superb poetry.
ReplyDeletethank u for reading glad u liked it:)
DeleteAwesome poetry Geet, you are right, this has to change. :-) good luck for the contest.
ReplyDeletekeep visitng!!! thnx :)
Deletea blog after my heart----beautifully written --and thanks a lot for voting for my post ---I would love to vote for this one but just don't know how to go about it ---please do let me know ----and thanks a lot for visiting and appreciating my poem --please do keep visiting you are more than welcome
ReplyDeletewarm regards
rajni
Hi rajni,
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Thanks:) Arti ...so sweet of u:)
Deletethanks Rajni..yeah , liked ur blog..thnx for visitng:)nd voting!
This is... So WOW Geeta!! A Beautiful thought and such wonderfully expressed emotions, all the very best dear :-)
ReplyDeletekeep visitng dear:) thnx for the lovely comment!!!
DeleteShe is a woman of courage, woman of strength. And also woman is personification of self sacrifice.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written Geeta. Change is mandatory.
Thanks :) Keep visitng!!
DeleteYou might some of posts for women. Do take time to read.
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sure :)
DeleteAwesome poem and all the best for the contest!
ReplyDeleteThanks Saru ...same to u Dear:)
DeleteThe main thing in your post that i completely agree with is that women should not wait for help and she should help herself. That's something that we need to see more and more to solve all the ills against women.
ReplyDeletethank you for spending the time to read my post...
DeleteThis is a nice one Geeta...a really nice thought presented well!
ReplyDeleteBest Wishes for the contest!
Thanks for your visit & comment:)
Deepa
thnx dear:)
DeleteNicely presented . All the best for the contest .
ReplyDeletethanx team g ..keep visiting nd inspiring :)
DeleteI can simply say "Awesome" Geeta Singh...
ReplyDeleteYou knw well in Rajputs they dont marry any girl without taking "Dowry"
I am always with you to stop these kind of crimes....
My fav Lines "She is not a commodity ,in the horrible dowry market" I like this
wow ! thnx 4 d awesm comment :)
Deletevery nice entry for the contest
ReplyDeletewish you luck with it
thnx 4 d read :)
Deletethnx :)
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