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Quit smoking today,
Don't leave it on the other day.
Quit Smoking is really a tough action to take ,
Smokers want to quit smoking for the life's sake .
But find it difficult to do so as nicotine is very addictive,
And hard to get rid off.
Quit smoking today,
Don't leave it on the other day.
The desire to give up your habit of smoking ,
learn about the effects of smoking .
Create a strong will to avoid a smoking relapse,
Understand its consequences .
Quit smoking today...
Don't leave it on the other day...
Face the fact that you need to stop smoking,
Follow, finish and maintain a plan to quit smoking.
It leads to a healthier, smoke-free life,
And you will live a long and healthy life.
Quit smoking today...
Don't leave it on the other day...
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Nice message Geetu.. I'm also thinking about giving a message... :)
ReplyDeleteA very worthy message :)
ReplyDeleteNice message and very good use of the prompt.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Geeta! Quit Smoking! :) let's spread!
ReplyDeletea nice message and the good work! The theme seems to have been incorporated very well too!
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT
Read mine at The Other Day
Aww.. Geeta.. That was awesome.. QUIT SMOKING... I will share this post in my FB Profile too.. You rock girl.. all the best. Wanna know what happened the other day?
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Wow!!
ReplyDeleteAmazing! So musical, admirable and sweet :)
Loved it
Good luck Geets ..:)
gr8 job done for a better cause.....:))
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put accross the good message. I hope this will be read by many people and that it will indeed make a change. Thanks for the amazing post!
ReplyDeleteSureindran - The Other Day
Great post Geeta,with a message which educated people also tend to overlook,and ignore.
ReplyDeleteThe message must be followed. I for one, am quitting anyway. Nice one. :)
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT.
Very well said and written, Geeta... Great work :)
ReplyDeleteProbably the only post with a message, good choice, quit smoking.. Good luck
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot !!!!!!!!!!! for you appreciation and wishes :)
ReplyDeleteThoughtful entry, great way to communicate the message.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot geeta singh for this post.this is very help full post for all Indian people.
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i'm sorry to say this but i didn't quite like ur post. next time u write a poem , please incorporate a few eye-ball grabbing tools that have been used by poets over time viz. rhyming words, similes etc.. this post looks like a prose piece aligned in the form of a poem
ReplyDeleteCheers! for the message... nice read
ReplyDeleteATB
Though choice to make--- wife or Peace of mind...
Find out what happened - The Other Day on my blog -THE SILENT WORDS
Good message .. nicely articulated.
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ReplyDeletea different take...nice:)
ReplyDeleteIt is wise and perhaps possible for smokers to quit smoking.
ReplyDeleteBut, it is next to impossible for nonsmokers to quit it, cos they are not smoking, yet they are having to inhale more hazardous smoke in the smoky surroundings!
A wise, awareness-provoking poem! Keep it up and up and up!
thanks the critics
ReplyDeleteSuresh Thanks for ur support and appreciation :)
Ah, I don't smoke, even though I've been tempted more than once before. You've brought out the dire need to quit smoking in this post, and that's what's so lovely about it :)
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ReplyDeleteBeautifully written. Conveying a great message to the smokers :)
Peace,
Aakash Kokz
www.unexpressedthoughts.com